Hi Ross,
I use Firefox and your site has a few format problems in that browser, although it's OK in IE. I'm sure someone can point you in the right direction to correct that.
Is the website aimed at the construction industry or the public? As your home page emphasises the construction industry the public may just move on thinking it's not for them. If you are aiming for the public then I'd have VAT inclusive pricing to aid comparison with B&Q and Amazon etc.
Personally I'd title 'Delivery Options' just Shipping. I'd leave the 'hopes to' out of the opening sentence and be positive! It might never happen but I'm unsure what the charge is for a £110 order weighing 21Kg - is it £0.23?
I'd re-draft the 'Shipping and Handling' and 'Delivery Schedule' paragraphs in the T&Cs - even combine them. They have several grammatical and spelling errors and the information conflicts with each other and with your new Delivery Options wording.
Also, under Tax Charges you say you will only accept orders from the UK but under Making A Purchase you talk about ordering from North America - which is it?
Personally i don't like sites that force me to create an account before I can buy - I think that should be optional.
Your eBay link should go to your eBay shop not your 'My World' page.
Hopefully your conversion rate will pick up soon but no matter how slick the website, price will always be the deciding factor in today's austere times. Not your decision I know!! Good luck.
I use Firefox and your site has a few format problems in that browser, although it's OK in IE. I'm sure someone can point you in the right direction to correct that.
Is the website aimed at the construction industry or the public? As your home page emphasises the construction industry the public may just move on thinking it's not for them. If you are aiming for the public then I'd have VAT inclusive pricing to aid comparison with B&Q and Amazon etc.
Personally I'd title 'Delivery Options' just Shipping. I'd leave the 'hopes to' out of the opening sentence and be positive! It might never happen but I'm unsure what the charge is for a £110 order weighing 21Kg - is it £0.23?
I'd re-draft the 'Shipping and Handling' and 'Delivery Schedule' paragraphs in the T&Cs - even combine them. They have several grammatical and spelling errors and the information conflicts with each other and with your new Delivery Options wording.
Also, under Tax Charges you say you will only accept orders from the UK but under Making A Purchase you talk about ordering from North America - which is it?
Personally i don't like sites that force me to create an account before I can buy - I think that should be optional.
Your eBay link should go to your eBay shop not your 'My World' page.
Hopefully your conversion rate will pick up soon but no matter how slick the website, price will always be the deciding factor in today's austere times. Not your decision I know!! Good luck.
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